my very long horror story

Characters :  

• george
• Dawn
• Eli
• Maddie
• Jack
• Setting : It is at a house 100 years old, called the amityville
• Plot It is all about a land that carries a very strong dibook, that does not like families, so it tricks a man called Joseph parker into killing his family. his family has to get him away from the house. The house kept saying to him catch em and kill em…                              
• It is based on a true story!!!

THE AMITYVILLE HORROR

“Ah what a nice morning, ahh hello Eli”

“Joseph do I have to call you Daddy now”

“no you can call me anything”

“come here my little boy” said Dawn

“So I can call you poo poo pants, yea what ever” said joseph

“go eat some breakfast honey said dawn”

“ so I guess that we have a big day ahead of us” said joseph…

chapter two

house hunting           

“Ohh that house, right there” said dawn

“That is called the amityville OK we’ll see” said joseph
“Hello I see this house is for sale said joseph”

“ yes”

“ how much is it”

“it is $ 190500, OK, do we have to buy it honey”, “please”said Dawn,

“ OK”,

“thank you honey”,

“excuse me but under one condition, well the people that used to to live here died in the house”,

“ what” said dawn

“the defeos”.

“ honey do you think that we can make this work”said dawn,

“OK”,said joseph

“thank you sweetheart”.

 deal we’ll have the house said joseph...

chapter three

                                                                                                                                                                                                  when it all begins

So kids like the house,

yea it looks old said Jon,

yea it is, well get over it.

Wow I like this place mommy said maddie,

yea sweetheart it’s cool.

come on kids get inside and start unpacking.

ok.

 mommy mommy mommy there is a girl in my room and a very bad man killed her and he makes her do bad stuff.

 he shot her in the head, and he shot the rest of the family.

 Oh no said dawn,

I think I know how the defeo’s died honey,

how,

they were shot by there son,

oh my god sweetheart.

Good night honey,

good night mommy… DAY 13/28

chapter four

THE POSSESSION STARTS

DAY 17

THIS IS THE ONLY PLACE WARM IN THE DUMB HOUSE,

sweety you need to eat,

WHEN DID PEOPLE GET SO DUMB,

i’m not dumb i’m just trying to help you,

NO YOUR NOT YOU ARE JUST BEING MEAN,

ok then i give up i’m leaving to get the kids breakfast. Kids breakfast,

coming mom,

mommy the girl in my bedroom said that joseph is going to get possessed.

THERE IS NO GIRL IN YOUR BEDROOM OK,

but mommy,

BUT NOTHING,

i’m sorry sweetie,

mommy there is a girl in my room,

ok sweetie.

chapter five

FOR GODS SAKE GET OUT

DAY 28

KIDS COME ON GET OUT OF HERE JOSEPH HAS A SHOTGUN,

jon whack him with a pole,

wack joseph falls off the roof,

dawn gets the shotgun puts it to his head starts crying and whacks him in the head,

he is knocked out now get in the boat,

yes mommy.

Ellie, maddie, jon we need to get out of here turn it on jon ok mom,

lets get out of here…

after 28 day they were out of there and gone.

they never went back…

here are some real pics…

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